January 23, 2006

Todays poem

Filed under: In English,Poetry,Text only — Sigrinn @ 23:04

I’m not completely satisfied with it, so any comments would be nice…

I’m in
under your skin,
digging deeper

sending my labourers
in every direction,
they work by a schedule

I’m in
under your skin,
slowly breaching,
like an old-fashioned miner,
advancing in your veins

like a peeled onion
you reveal
layer after layer

I’m in
under your skin,
treasure hunting